We are learning to:
. give our reader a clearer picture by including adjectives in our recounts
. correctly place full stops and capital letters
· In my writing I will have included one or two adjectives
. In my writing I will have started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop
Caleb you have included several adjectives in this recount. You have correctly placed capital letters and full stops. Great writing.
To finish off your writing with an interesting ending.
To include an exclamation mark in your writing where appropriate.